Sunday, 12 April 2015

(21/2) Sample Introduction #1: (Medium) with Annotations

Sample introduction (medium) on the 'Gorging The Innocent' article (Coleridge)

Due to an increase in the incidence of childhood obesity the issue of whether or not society needs to take a greater role in reducing obesity amongst children has been raised in the media lately. In Sam Coleridge’s article ‘Gorging The Innocent’ written in the Herald Sun it is contended that in order for obesity within society to be reduced parents, schools and the media need to ensure they are sending appropriate healthy food messages to our children. Coleridge employs an impassioned and at times passive aggressive tone to encourage doctors; teachers and parents to draw on the impact inaction could have on the children in their own lives. Accompanying Coleridge’s article is an image of a traditional family that are clearly obese. The image shows the family feasting on junk food, drawing the association between the food choices of parents and eventual health problems in our youth. In doing so the image makes the argument that parents need to ensure that they are sending food messages that will supplement a healthy lifestyle into the future. The image employs a more openly aggressive tone to attack parents and encourage a sense of urgency to be established within the readership.

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