Tuesday 15 September 2015

YR10 ENGLISH SEMESTER 2 ORAL PRESENTATION


YR10 ENGLISH SEMESTER 2 ORAL PRESENTATION

Oral Presentation and Assessment to commence in week 1 of term 4

Your oral presentation will involve delivering a speech on one (1) of the following issues:

A.    Euthanasia.

B.    Freedom of Speech.

C.   Gender Equality.

Preparing your oral presentation

Think about what you want to achieve: you want to inform your audience and convince them of a particular point of view?

Think about your audience: what background knowledge do they have about the issue and have they any particular interest in it?

Brainstorm and research your issue, remember you have a limited time for your presentation; a minimum of three (3) minutes and maximum of four (4).

Write a draft of your speech, summarise it into points to write on palm cards.

Rehearse your presentation and get its length right. Ask a friend to listen and time you.

 

Introduction

Capture your listeners’ attention: Begin with a question, a funny story, a startling comment, or anything that will make them think.

State your purpose; e.g. ‘I’m going to talk about...’; ‘Today I want to explain…’

Establish your contention. e.g. Food is not a privilege, it’s a right; a right to life.’

Present an outline of your talk; e.g.: ‘I will concentrate on the following points: First of                

                                                      all…Then…This will lead to… And finally…’

The Body

Present your main points one by one in logical order.

Make it absolutely clear when you move to another point. e.g.: ‘The next point is that ...’;

                                ‘OK, now I am going to talk about ...’; ‘Right, Now I'd like to explain ... ’

Use clear examples to illustrate your points and support your contention.

Include a rebuttal to discredit your opposition’s point of view. e.g. ‘Quality of life means more than quantity of 

                                                                                                   life when keeping wild animals in zoos’

 

 

The Conclusion

It is very important to leave your audience with a clear idea of the issue you have presented.

It is very important to leave your audience with a clear understanding of your contention.

Summarise the main points again, using phrases like: e.g.: ‘To sum up...’; ‘So, in conclusion...’;

                                                                                    ‘OK, to recap the main points…’

Restate the purpose of your talk, and say that you have achieved your aim: e.g.: ‘I think you can now see    

                                                                    that...’;  ‘My intention was ..., and it should now be clear that ...’

Thank the audience, and invite questions: e.g.: ‘Thank you. Are there any questions?’

Talk to your audience, don't read to them!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Criteria
Below expected level
0-2
At expected level
3-4
Above expected level
5
Introduction of topic
Topic introduced.
Topic introduced clearly, and purpose of talk was made clear.
Topic introduced clearly and in an interesting way. Purpose of talk was made clear. Outline of points was given.
Development of topic
Some understanding of topic shown. Some links and connections made between ideas. Points are usually developed with minimum detail. Information is usually relevant.
Good understanding of topic shown. Links and connections between ideas made clear. Information was relevant and expressed in own words. Points were developed with sufficient and appropriate details.
A very good understanding of the topic shown. Links and connections between ideas made clear. Information was relevant and well expressed in own words. Points were well-organised and developed with sufficient and appropriate details.
Ability to engage and involve audience
Some eye contact was made.
Techniques used to engage audience were minimal, or mainly ineffective.
An interesting approach taken to topic. Speaker used techniques such as, anecdotes, surprising facts and emotional appeals.
Speaker monitored audience and tries to engage them. An interesting or original approach taken to the topic. Speaker used techniques such as, anecdotes, humour, surprising facts, emotional appeals, rhetorical questions, repetition.
Suitability of presentation for purpose and audience
Attempts were made to tailor the presentation content to the intended purpose of persuading.
The presentation content and structure was tailored to the audience and to the intended purpose of persuading.
The presentation content, structure and delivery were closely tailored to the audience and to the intended purpose of persuading.
Voice: clarity, pace, fluency
Presenter occasionally spoke clearly and at a good pace.
Presenter usually spoke clearly to ensure audience comprehension. Delivery was usually fluent.
Presenter spoke clearly and at a good pace to ensure audience comprehension. Delivery was fluent and expressive.
Vocabulary, sentence structure, grammar
The vocabulary of the presentation was mainly appropriate for the topic. The presentation content was occasionally grammatically correct.
The vocabulary of the presentation was appropriate for the topic. Sentence structures were usually correct. The presentation content was usually grammatically correct.
The vocabulary of the presentation was appropriate for the topic. A variety of phrases and sentence structures were used. The presentation content was grammatically correct.
Conclusion of topic
An attempt was made to conclude the presentation.
The presentation was summed up clearly.
The presentation was summed up clearly and effectively, with key points emphasised.

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC YR10 ORAL PRESENTATION

 

 

SCORE_______/35

(12/4) Speech Planning Sheet






Introduction
Topic:
 
 
Persona:
Contention:
Hook:
The supporting arguments
 
 
 
Body Paragraph #1
Topic Sentence:
Elaborate on topic:
Evidence:
Explanation of Evidence:
PLT 1:
 
PLT 2:
 
PLT 3:
 

 

 

Body Paragraph #2
Topic Sentence:
Elaborate on topic:
Evidence:
Explanation of Evidence:
PLT 1:
 
PLT 2:
 
PLT 3:
 

 

Rebuttal:
Outline opposition argument:
Elaborate
Outline your rebuttal :
Evidence:
Explain evidence:
Conclusion
·         Outline Contention
·         Explain what the issue is and why it is important to you.
·         Restate supporting ideas
·         Worm: Leave audience with your idea stuck in their head.

 

 

The Speech Checklist
 
  • Hook
  • Contention
  • Inclusive Language
  • A purpose
  • Structure
  • Signposting
  • Supporting Ideas
  • Evidence
  • PLTs
  • Clear Language
 

 

(11/4) Getting Started With Speech Writing

Choose your topic. A good speech is focuses on a message. The message needs to match the occasion for the speech. It should resonate with the audience's interests, the mood of the occasion, and most of all, it should convey something important.

Find purpose or thesis. Why are you giving a speech on this topic? ("My teacher told me to!" or "I have to" is not a valid reason.)
  • Thesis is the main point to emphasize. If you are writing a speech about an event in your life, what's your message? Your topic may cover your near-death experience, but your thesis or purpose could be advocating the use of seat belts. You need reasoning to back it up, "it saved my life" is pretty hard to argue with!
    • A good speech is made for a good reason: To inspire, to instruct, to rally support, or to lead to action. These are noble purposes -- and not merely to sound off, feed the speaker's ego, to flatter, intimidate, or to shame anyone.

Get organized. All good (sorry, I always say "great" all the time!) speeches require "shape": the "intro" (introduction), the stuffing (the body), and the "outro" (conclusion). A speech is not an amorphous blob or tangled strings of thought\\
  • The old saying is hard to beat for shaping your speech: "Intro -- Tell them what you are about to tell them. Body -- Tell them. Conclusion -- the summary." That is the structure of a good speech.
  • Body of the speech. State at least three points to support your argument. If they build on each other, good. First draft, make a list. You can pick out the strongest arguments later.

Get persuasive. Persuade any way that you can. If your points aren't logical, pad them with other reasons. If they don't agree with you on a topic, at least get them hanging on your every word.

Sunday 6 September 2015

(10/4) Speechology: The Science of Speech Writing.



Speech writing can be a daunting task. Not only do I have to create something, informative and entertaining but I need to present it in front of 24 pairs of judgemental eyes. But it doesn't need to be daunting. The process of speech writing can be broken down and although we can't bottle 'humour' and 'entertainment' we can make it easier for us to write an effective persuasive speech.

 

So here is the 8 step plan for effective speech writing. (Mr Abbott's speech writer start taking notes now)

 

1. The Introduction.

 An effective introduction boils down to three things. Hooking the audience, clearly introducing the issue and outlining your contention and supporting arguments.

 

 

2. The Hook.
Your introduction needs to include a hook, to grasp the audiences attention. You can't be persuasive if your audience is doodling in their margins. Make your audience take notice by including a anecdote, a relevant joke or cheeky quote. You either pretend to be someone else (called taking on a persona) to make your speech even more interesting.

 

3. Making your speech logical and easy to follow.

 You MUST make your speech easy to follow. This means signposting your ideas throughout your piece and ensuring that your ideas are logically sequenced throughout your speech.

 

4. Your speech must have a structure.

 Structure is important. This may seem obvious but a poorly structured speech can make it impossible to follow and difficult to understand. Signpost you ideas and employ a structure such as the one provided by your teacher.

 

5. Persuasive Language Techniques are boss.

 Include PLTs to help you engage your audience and to also make your speech persuasive.

 

6. Include Evidence.

Each of your ideas need to be supported by evidence. This can take the form of statistics, expert opinion or facts. These provide support for your ideas and validates your argument.

 

7. Speak clearly and in an engaging manner.

 Nothing is duller then a robot reading about euthanasia. Don't be a robot. Be expressive, fluent, engaging, look at the audience, vary your tone, speech with passion. Do not read from notes, do not memorize your speech, do not speak at one pace. Do not be a politician. 

 

8. Conclude your presentation with a <BANG> 

Leave the audience wanting more, with something to think about or a reason to take action. Our conclusion will be the last thing people hear of your. You must restate your contention but do it in an interesting way that engages the audience. Linking into an idea established in the introduction can be effective.

Sample body paragraph: THR- JJ MED